All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 03'

who wins a fight.....no one....TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm thinking Paul is trying to figure out how to slay these dragons. But all eggs must be destroyed.

Really Marge complicated things around our hero!

THere is going to be a lot of work to reach an acceptable

resolution. Miss Wright seems a little too naive for me.

I thought that Glenda was a fighter but I was, apparently, wrong. Was Paul worth fighting for? His casual episode with Marge makes me doubt it. The plot thickens! Paul has his work cut out handling all the governmental crap. In my 45 years in the business I have met many like Wilton who are continuously on the look out for a knife between their shoulder blades. A truly great tale so far! Pete.

to Tim Mcgraw: I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!

This is a great story and I hope there are several more chapters. Thanks for the work you do.

hurry the next chapter along,this is a great story.

Interesting and exciting. Great use of conflict between the various characters really moves this story along. A Must Read!