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He wrote her a second letter telling her about the conversation with her mother, emphasizing again his understanding of the situation and support, and telling her in quotes how his happy thoughts led to several happy endings, the last just before he wrote his letter. He assured her if she were present she would have approved of his handling of the situation.
He reviewed his letter. The word 'situation' kept surfacing. Situation had taken on so many meanings. It wasn't just her father's edict, but now included both dating and having sex with Leo. Now it also meant how he and ultimately they were handling it.
He told her loved her and couldn't wait to see her. He had to work Friday but promised to be at her house Saturday afternoon. He also reminded her as discretely as he could he did want to know how she was filling the hours he wasn't there.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoI see all these negative comments attached to chapter 19. Am I supposed to believe the critics all hated this story so much yet read 19 chapters. Or, they are so dull of mind they started a story at installment 19.
I think it is a fine story. It's not Stienbeck but is has something to offer this website in this genre. I have stayed with it for 19 chapters.
Anonymousover 13 years agoJean is dating two different men. It's not like she's married so why bother staying with Miquel? Honestly, she spends every waking moment with Leo, she's fucking him, her parents like him, so who is Miquel and why does he matter? So far as I can see, it's an easy fix. Jean and Miquel break up, Jean and Leo hook up...everyone's happy.
Anonymousover 13 years agoFor Cryin' out loud quit making Nigule a wimp and bive him a set of balls. Heve him tell the skanky cunt to fuck off, Let the bitch come visit him and and find him in bed getting the the daylites fucked out of him by a more beautiful, sexier woman that appreciates him. That after Leo has given her AIDS
Anonymousover 13 years agoSo I gather the problem is miguel has a small dick and this is the cause of him being and pathic wimp? Seriously?
To the author: lesbians have no dick, but are perfectly capable of satisfying a woman in bed. Some woman have pussies that are dry and too sore to have sex, but they satisfy their lover in bed. Indian guys are renounced for having small dicks, but they wrote the freaking Kama sutra!
The point is that the premise of your story is outrageously stupid.
If you're writing this story because of some dick size issues, stop spending your time writing about passive self deprecating guys being abused in relationships and get yourself to a therapist ASAP.
Honestly, there isn't erotica in thus story, just wallowing over and over without progress.
Therapy can really help. Don't suffer alone because you can't see how to deal with things on your own.
