All Comments on 'Change in Plans'

Why in the name of all that's holy haven't I come across you before? Even though I deduced she was a ghost before the end, the story was f-ing great!

I liked it very much and look forward to extensions of your other stories about Gabriel and Sebastian as well as a continuation of "Shadows and Light". You are good at mixing erotic and also a good story around. Keep it up!

Loved this short little story!

I hope I get to read some more from you.

~Nightime

I really enjoyed the story. It had a nice twist at the end. Thanks

It was a bit creepy, but really well done. Not a typical hearts and flowers romance, but a Valentine's Day story nevertheless. Good luck in the contest.

The story was short, sweet and well written. Good luck.

i love this story, very well done

A short and sweet story!

Good characters, excellent descriptions, and I didn't expect the ending. Keep it up.

I really loved this story alot. It was great and loved the story line. Good Luck.

Very well written. Great dialogue.

Good luck in the contest.

Well written and although it was an old theme(Wel there aint nothing new under the sun) It was handled well. Good luck

Even if I did figure it out early. It wasn't the usual love story but it was a love story. Thank you and good luck.

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

a chance. I really felt this story. It was simple, creepy and pretty touching. Good work on this one, ED. Will be reading it again sometime soon(: <3 Lil, KR.

I disagree with the other comment, this IS a Valentine's Day story, just not one with the typical romance in it. It's a story of love for humanity though.

It's beautifully written and very touching.

Apparently, there aren't very many writers who understand how to write a Valentine's Day story. Throwing in the words Valentine's Day and adding the detail about a Saint Valentine's medal does not make for a Valentine's Day story.

Sorry, but I can't score your story better than the score I gave you, not to mention that it was just too damn short or maybe that was a good thing.