by thornapple
Great read, moved along very well. Got to be a continuation or I will die of curiosity, the baby? Ginger? Sharon? Gotta keep going.
As for me - I liked every bit of this story from start to finish and can really relate to it in many ways. You can find love in many ways but the best way is when you don't have to hide the fact that you can love more than one person and not hide it from each other.! I do hope this story keeps going and does not leave us at this point and time. Thanks. JAG/TSO
Having all these new sexual situations all at once reduces the thrill and specialness of each one. I like the writing and even the length, but the machine-gun like rate of new partners and experiences made each one a little less exciting.
Did Anita fall for Greg? Could she handle the special feelings she had for Greg,and still stay with Nate?..... What about the statement from Evelyn to Nate that they were pregnant? Will she become too attached to Nate since he is the father of her baby?..... Will Ginger and Nate be able to handle their relationship without falling in love with each other, especially since Anita has an infatuation with Greg that could make them more than just sex lovers?.... A lot of questions left to be answered. I hope that the author continues this very good story. Thanks for the good read......Rich
Very sexy, intimate sex going on, but in my own life it would have taken about 3 years for all of that. I really wanted to hear about Anita finally getting her fill, but you left us to imagine what went on at the cabin.
Really hot story. Long, long, long, but never tiring. You probably could have easily broken it into a couple of chapters. More psychologically sensual than blatant sexual. Lots of thinking going on here.
A bit long and predictable but overall it was a decent story. The editing and grammar worked well and made it better to read. After all those chapters the author fell short on the ending. He just stopped writing, like oh well that's enough, or his parents came home and caught him playing with the computer.