by slickey
That was good ! Wow , I was right there with them . Can't wait to see what happens next .
I like your plot and how you've written the story so far. I'm definitely a fan. Can't wait till the next chapter!
The scenes in the gay bar were so hot I couldn't control myself! Wow! However, maybe I read it wrong but early on there seemed to be a mix up between Casey and Lindsey that needs an edit. Jennie Elf.
Wow, what a plot twist! Now I've got to dive into chapter 5 to see what happens!