All Comments on 'Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 04'

I liked the thought of a long sea voyage, but I think Charlotte could have been more resisting, at least in her thoughts. Not actually doing it though; her punishment was painful enough.

display of submission and the desire to serve ones Master...i don't think this girl knows whats in store for her she's become so entralled by the control feeling safe and happy in giving pleasure...and now it will be ripped from her*sigh* such a tragedy but then...maybe not;) i'll read on respectfully

All of a sudden the tone of the story changed, as did the personality of Charlotte. Ick.

I think this one was well done. The slow methodical brainwashing/training of Charlotte into an obedient submissive followed a believable path. Top rating on this part.