All Comments on 'Charlotte's Bet'

Maybe I should make a bet like this. Great story.

One of the best erotic stories I have ever read, if not the best one!

Read it twice in two days now, each time made me cum hard :-)

I think that they should make her the sex slave of those boys forever.

Loved it.

write more

You should finish the story

Any story about the forfeit?

Great story. Nicely paragraphed and easy to read.

Hope there may be a follow up, showing what the forefeit may be.

Fantastic, I've enjoyed this and all your other stories. Thank you.

Don't leave it too long for the next part, Please!!!!

Great story

cant wait to hear about her forfeit!

Loved it - cant wait to hear about her forfeit!

Even as fantasy (if it was) it was entertaining. Not sure of how one would practice for such an event - however not thinking I was all that at 33 I met a young lady of twenty who caught me coming from a period of abstinence (very virile) and after several hours of expressing our desires she was still quite lubricated (without the use of aids or jellies).

Fully expected to hear that Jane and her cohorts were pre-draining the tools entering charlotte's web.