by chubbymindiana
don't mind the "haters" - i thought it was well written - it's difficult enough to find a unique story out here, but i thought yours was unique in its own way . . . and it gave me an idea to use on my own wife!! keep writing!
let me get this straight a husband sets up his wife to be fucked by the pizza boy 'Finds ' them at it and then gets the pizza boy to suck HIM off sorry but WHAT the FUCK who moved the rock here. If this was a fantasy and if you ever get this thing to work then goodbye and good luck!
Sounds good to me I'm up for it! :-)) Oh and by the way to the last reviewer straight guys like getting sucked too, it doesn't make you gay just because a guy blows you, it usually just makes you cum.
The 'pizza boy' was not that convincing. Sure, Sweety was drunk, but pizza delivery has procedures for 'prank' orders, and Joey didn't follow them. Several other clues were offered before the "Joey" naming goof! All in all, fairly hot but the M-M cocksucking and the snowball are likely to raise ire amongst LW readers! (along with the usual 'willing cuck' diatribes!)
Wow you got me with this one. I guess the wife didn't know her husband was a bi-cuck. Damn. Sick.
Belongs in Gay Male or Fetish. Loving wives gets -5 Stars; Gay Male I 've never read and don't rate; fetish gets 4.5 Stars
Fantastic story. Set up great. For those who whined about categories you completely missed the great set up...... Guy comes out of his character/personality to give his wie the best night of their marriage. Bueno