by P4U
The story seems to go in circles and rambles but still good but it would profit from good editing.
The "author" obviously likes to hear himself talk. And stupidly.
VERY INTERESTING EROTICA PLS CONTINUE
P4U, I don't know about the rest of the people but I liked it very much. I would also Love to read more of it, so Please write more of it!!!!
Paul
The Revenger! After reading some of your comments how can anyone expect that you would be capable of reading a ten chapter story. Come on now. Stick to the cat in the hat type stories and you won't be so intimidated