All Comments on 'Cherry Blossom Girl Ch. 02'

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knightofheartsknightofheartsabout 15 years ago
Well done

Very well written chapter. I shall read on :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
SWEET!!!

Wow. Just read the first chapter and now this and I can't wait for more!! You're such a good author. Very written indeed! Great job and I can't wait for chapter 3 to find out what will happen between Sascha and Noah :)

evanslilyevanslilyabout 15 years ago
So where are we going from here?

<br>This was fab... :) Noah's one hot guy. Why don't I get to have any hot neighbours? Not fair at all.</br>

<br>Brilliantly written, as always. Poetry in prose. I can't wait to see more of this (so get on with it, girl!)</br>

<br>Lily</br>

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MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 15 years ago
Brilliant!

Haven't had the pleasure of reading a story this good in a while. The suspense is great and the drama is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next with these characters. They're so very intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I agree with Lily,

'Poetry in prose' indeed!

Your writing is brilliant. That makeout session was something else. I thought Sean from Kismet was hot, dare i say Noah is even hotter!!!

You are awesomeness lady, keep it coming.

incognito8incognito8about 15 years ago
Most Excellent!

I'm very excited for the next chapter. Nicely done!

soularsoularabout 15 years ago
Oh, I'm hooked...

I was so happy when I saw your update email, and this chapter certainly didn't disappoint. Beautifully written. I almost died laughing when she gave Brian that phone number. Too funny. And Noah indeed, sounds super hot. Still wondering how Alex will play into this? I can't wait to find out...bring on chapter 3!

<p>--Soular</p>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good job.

Aww he's just upset that she said "Alex". Can't wait for the next chapter, soon. Maybe somewhere down the line we'll get Ana & Sean will make an appearance. *wink wink*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Cant wait

Seriously loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
tasty!!!

This is too good, I cannot wait for more!

lovegoodstorieslovegoodstoriesabout 15 years ago
Abso Loved it!!

Great update. I enjoyed it immensely. I had to laugh and then sing the jingle when I saw the "digits" she gave to the young hottie. I am however totally on edge about how Alex will factor into the Noah and Sacha love triangle. Love how you make me really feel these characters. Until next update.

marexotic18marexotic18about 15 years ago
yum!

I thought this story was going to be about Alex and Sacha but I like Noah a lot but, so I am super excited! Can't wait for more!!!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 13 years ago
What Happened

That she is so angry with him because she doesn't remember. It does no pay to drink and frolic around...

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