by teachgirl1980
lI agree with the other comment about meeting someone like the woman in your story. I hope you have more stories!
New visitor, but wanted to let you know this was a great piece of writing; sensous, exciting, and the sequencing produced a perfect right of passage. All us males should have been fortunate enough to live your story.
Not your typical sex story but a really well written straight forward romantic "making love" story. well done.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, I did have a hard time, no pun intended, trying to place myself in Cory's place because you had written the story from a first person perspective. From the story, I have gained new insights into the female mind and I thank you for that.
Sehr gut – weiter so!
I really enjoyed that story, teachgirl; your name is perfect, by the way - I have so much to learn about writing and you weave your stories so well. I look forward to reading them all - and new ones!
Thank you for a most exciting tale.