All Comments on 'Chloe's Sex Lessons Ch. 15'

That was another great chapter that you wrote about Chloe and her sexual adventures. I wish that Randy could realize that he was in love with her and would marry her. I like how she was able to go to California and take Britney with her. All these chapters have been fabulous and well-written. I can hardly wait for the next chapter and see where you take these characters.

Though for the greatest part all is fine there are but a couple minor glitches. In the future watch more closely the use of "come" and "cum" may sound alike but have far different meanings. Also the gross maistake of "he had had" which should properly be "he'd had" is finding its way into the story.