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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Great visual descriptions. Action's hot, too. Could probably benefit from a bit more dialog even if it's just, "Oh, yeah!" or "That feels so good," etc. As it is now, it feels like 'a race to the finish' whereas allowing it to build a little more slowly could give you something really good. Nice effort, though. Hope to see more.

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Chloe is a naughty shy wife that loves to be a sexy little cock toy. She loves to be groped, fucked hard, and pump with or covered with cum. She admits she is a whore for any cock that she gets hard and is a total cum slut.