All Comments on 'Chocolate Cake'

At first I was startled by how quickly he jumped from timidity to aggressiveness, but it is believable. Thank you for your contribution

It was so good I wished it were longer. Gave it a five.

So nice to enjoy a sensitive erotic encounter by realistic persons.

As I said "I liked that" and how!!!

Great story - very erotic. So nicely described the coupling from start to finish. Excellent writing