by Desdmona
I hope this kid gets a break in the future. I am somewhat twisted as I felt Kim got what she deserved? Oh well paybacks can be tough. Thanks for a very good story.
There's so much of the real me in this story that it's one of my favorites, at least the nostalia portion of it. I remember fondly the times where the sexual side of me was piqued as I grew into adulthood -- the first valentine, the first kiss, the first time a boy ventured up my leg.
And suddenly the story took a turn. Why do you suppose someone could hate someone for an entire lifetime without real cause? I wanted to explore that. It felt right for there to be some justification, or revenge if you will. There's a feeling of sweetness with revenge, but I can't help wondering at what cost.
Great story in my opinion. Very good idea though somewhat sad regarding all aspects...