All Comments on 'Choices and Sacrifices Ch. 09'

I just recently bought a Mac and it does nothing to help me edit. It actually makes it harder and things slip past me a lot easier. If anyone is interested in editing for me, please email me. I know this chapter was a mess with the errors, I'm sorry! Forgive me please

Honestly, even though I want Sabrina and Keegan together I feel sorry for Quincy. He did it to himself though. Anyway, excited to see where you go with this story.

She should at least let him explain, get his side of the story. Quincy needs to have a seat somewhere. I'm very glad you updated, I really enjoy it.

I understand Sabrina is confused and hurt. If she just hear Keegan out she can put that past her and move on if that is what she chooses. She don't have to believe or get back with him. She did let Quincy explain so why not let Keegan do the same.

Quincy, Keegan, Sabrina and her family need some serious help. They don't realize they all have issues that need to be tackled...by a professional. Rochelle seem to be the only normal person.

Why is Keegan letting Bethany tag along? This will not help him get Sabrina back as long as Bethany is by his side.

Rochelle needs Quincy and Quincy needs Rochelle. Keegan should get Bethany out of his life and home before meeting our girl. Listen to the man and then go from there--take some time to wrap your mind around his tale. I think she should cut the family loose--who would want their kids hanging around this group?

I still don't like Qunicy, her momma and I giving Rochelle the side eye. Please finish this story! !

I really like this author work but she take way to long for an update. This story has not had an update in months and this is all we get. I am glad I have found another website to read for women of color because literotica authors take a long time to update their stories.

Keegan don't deserve Sabrina.She needs a new man, a good honest one that won't cheat on her

Love this story

You have my attention but in order to keep it, please finish the story. All of these characters have issues, life happens to us all, but at some point karma should kick in and have its lasting effects on all the characters involved, even Sabrina. Good or bad, karma happens with everyone...at some point.

I'm not telling you how to write your story, but Sabrina's mom and Keegan need to see Quincy for who he is, Keegan's parents may want to meet Sabrina, Keegan needs to talk with his dad as Sabrina needs to with her mom (in front of her sisters) and/or the Bishop, being who he is, needs to use a sermon to discuss Erika's prejudiced heart when/if Keegan makes a public display for Sabrina's heart in church.

There are so many directions this story can take, but concentrate on what you mostly want to convey and be careful of so many subplots.

This story is my crack. Please finish it.

please, we need a continuation of this beautiful love story. it is way too good of a story not to have some kind of an ending. so please keep writting. thank you.

You are a very cold person to leave us out here wandering. Great love story but you left to much hurt out there. Feel like Sabrina will never read this again.

Ok, so I just started reading this series and fell in love with the characters and the story! I got to the last chapter and was wondering where is the rest, there needs to be some closure! Please, please finish! 😀😊

It's hard reading their story without getting to an end. Please finish this soon.