All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

So, who, who is Brandon calling? It also seems very likely that Brandon is Uncle Randy's son and Tom knows about it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Man is he lucky: two hot women are in love with him. Can't wait for the next chapters to come out.

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
great story so far

I think that he most likely called stella,but I hope not.I mean if I were him I would have stayed with the two girls at the house.

dbroseleydbroseleyover 12 years ago

Another great chapter to this story, can't wait for the next chapter to come out, I agreed with one of the other coment that Brandon is Uncle Randy's son.

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
Great Story

Cant wait to see the next Chapter and how Stella handles it.. and does Brandon handle it well. does it come out that Mom and Uncle Randy did the "deed" and dad has refused to accept Brandon.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A very good story

It would be a shock to find out that your sister was the woman that you thought was the love of your life.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Thanks for the good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
kool

its kool where does it go from here.

.and it would have been better if her friend wouldnt have done anything with her brother and just leave it as a brother sister love and have them fall in love only brother and sister

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
waiting for the 4th series...

lovely story...loved reading it.......desperately waiting for the 4th series.

Choices101Choices101about 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you all!

Thank everyone who voted and commented, heck thank everyone who read the stories and liked them. We wanted to let you all know that Chapter 4 of Choices should be up and available for viewing tomorrow. To sure and follow me on Twitter, i give status updates daily.

Choices101

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Series

I like how you have weaved this tale. It is very good. The only criticism that I have is that I would wish that you would SLOWLY re-read what you have written. Hopefully then you would see some of the mistakes that are in the story. If not, please, please have someone edit it for you.

Again, I have enjoyed your series and look forward to the next installment but, please, have someone proof-read and edit it.

CWR2014CWR2014about 12 years ago
Great Story

Nice job again, you got me wondering about what's next. I hope you keep this story going it is very interesting. Thanks for your time and effort.

RockyStoneRockyStoneabout 12 years ago
Blown away

That is the best description of my thoughts here. Awesome story; I figured the uncle is the real father of Brandon early on. A straight on brother/sister would take a lot away from this tale. I'm glad it comes as it does and I'm off to read the final.

RS

JagnagJagnagalmost 6 years ago
This plot is crazy good

Love the mask idea except if he knew kim so well how is it he didnt recognize the same tattoo ??

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