All Comments on 'Chosen Mate Ch. 11'

This is an amazing tale. I want to let you know I am truly enjoyingf this story. I'd guve 100 stars if I can.

the wait was frustrating but worthwhile. :)

flows effortlessly on from the previous chapters, and i love how the thought-dialogue supports the surface action and communication, letting us know not only is on their lips but what's on their minds. there's a definite gearing-up towards turbulence, making me keen to read on.

absolutely loving the oldman/harry conceit - one i'd have thought hard to handle well but you do it so much better than 'well'!

hungry for the next pages,

butters x