All Comments on 'Chris’ Hard Choices Ch. 03'

Mom and her sister will be just what he needs to keep him well fucked. I just want to see more of what is going to happen. Who else is he going to get to fuck.

What about his dad's sister, she will have to care for him, and it would be a good time for her to get fucked by him.

Thanks for the great chapter.

I love this story and have enjoyed it very much so far.

Grammar and spelling have improved considerably and - although this is an "armature" site, as one reader commented in support of the author - this DOES matter to many readers. To me, too.

What is even more important, though, is that even in fiction there should be continuity.

Apart from the Eve/Kay mix-up there is Carolyn, who in Ch.2 'had never even kissed a woman before' whereas in Ch.3 we learn that she has been at it with Lea since they were teenagers.

So, bamadude, please check for continuity, too, when re-reading your story or, better still, have somebody else check the story before submission.

But thanks for the story. Did I mention I liked it?

...and then there's rediculous. What a rich fantasy world you live in where a person can't even fart without someone announcing that they just have to fuck the shit out of them. Makes me wonder if you've ever even been laid. lol

Weren't his wrists broken?

I need to hear more about Maria giving him therapy!!!

How could Chris mastubate with two broken wrists.

Still awesome 5 stars!!!!!!

let's see 2 broken wrists, catches CAN OF BEER, jerks off, grabs ass while eating women. while i understand this is fantasy the writer seems to have forgotten any kind of realism. but still a decent story

This is a easy read, enjoyable story. 5 stars.