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Click hereLooking at the two lovers, Leah said. " You're both wrong, All of our dreams and come true."
Exhausted, the three lovers fell asleep in each other's arms to a very content sleep. Each wondering what wonderful adventures may lie ahead.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agolet's see 2 broken wrists, catches CAN OF BEER, jerks off, grabs ass while eating women. while i understand this is fantasy the writer seems to have forgotten any kind of realism. but still a decent story
Anonymousabout 13 years ago...and then there's rediculous. What a rich fantasy world you live in where a person can't even fart without someone announcing that they just have to fuck the shit out of them. Makes me wonder if you've ever even been laid. lol
IMcRoutover 13 years agoI love this story and have enjoyed it very much so far.
Grammar and spelling have improved considerably and - although this is an "armature" site, as one reader commented in support of the author - this DOES matter to many readers. To me, too.
What is even more important, though, is that even in fiction there should be continuity.
Apart from the Eve/Kay mix-up there is Carolyn, who in Ch.2 'had never even kissed a woman before' whereas in Ch.3 we learn that she has been at it with Lea since they were teenagers.
So, bamadude, please check for continuity, too, when re-reading your story or, better still, have somebody else check the story before submission.
But thanks for the story. Did I mention I liked it?
digdaddyrichover 13 years agoMom and her sister will be just what he needs to keep him well fucked. I just want to see more of what is going to happen. Who else is he going to get to fuck.
What about his dad's sister, she will have to care for him, and it would be a good time for her to get fucked by him.
Thanks for the great chapter.
