by 2fast2quick
Give us some more... Love when friends become lovers...
One issue is the Olympic gymnast girl. None have huge breasts. Most are built like 12 yr olds, if they aren't actually 12. Doing what they do, breasts are a detriment to balance and technique.
That said, I like it. The characters are kind of crude, but you've really written it well where I believe they are good friends. Keep it up.
Just couldn't get into 'this story so stoped reading about halfway through the first page. I didn't rate it.
Have you ever watched Olympic gymnastics? The girls are not tall with big tits & asses.
Outstanding story, nicely written, and I really like the pace of this story!!! Eager to continue reading this fun story!