All Comments on 'Chrissy Ch. 01'

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Loves_music_loves_to_danceLoves_music_loves_to_dancealmost 10 years ago
Like it!!

Give us some more... Love when friends become lovers...

Ethical_HunterEthical_Hunteralmost 10 years ago
Good

Loved it, please continue.

MaximguyMaximguyover 9 years ago
Good!

One issue is the Olympic gymnast girl. None have huge breasts. Most are built like 12 yr olds, if they aren't actually 12. Doing what they do, breasts are a detriment to balance and technique.

That said, I like it. The characters are kind of crude, but you've really written it well where I believe they are good friends. Keep it up.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 7 years ago
Don't know

Just couldn't get into 'this story so stoped reading about halfway through the first page. I didn't rate it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Olympic gymnast

Have you ever watched Olympic gymnastics? The girls are not tall with big tits & asses.

G5902G5902about 2 years ago

Outstanding story, nicely written, and I really like the pace of this story!!! Eager to continue reading this fun story!

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