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"Or would you rather I check you from behind?" I added as I ran a hand down her rump.
"Fuck you," she sighed.
"Is that an invitation?" I teased. This was killing me inside. "Just remember that next time, you are getting that dildo rammed up your ass."
"Damn you," she seethed once more. "I have to go before security suspects something." Like they didn't all know precisely what had been going on? How dumb did she think they were?
Without another word she strode out of my bedroom into the main area. "What have you found?" she questioned the guards.
Of course they had found nothing damning. They had to be suspicious of all the TVs and computer stations without internet hook-ups but no one mentioned a thing.
"This was a colossal waste of time," Melrose said in an exaggerated display. "Let's go." Dr. Bass led the way down the stairs but stumbled on the first step.
The last guard in line smirked at me.
"Do you miss Dana much?" I inquired quietly.
"And how," she rolled her eyes. "Tonight was a total bust. Anyone with half a brain knew you expected a raid tonight and would have everything stashed somewhere else. All this overtime is good for my paycheck but I'd kill for a good night's sleep."
"Oh, you are preaching to the choir, ma'am," I chuckled, "preaching to the choir."
I went back to my room and lay down. Sleep did not come easy. I knew that the Science Club's cameras had recorded the events of the past half hour; I just had to figure out what to do with them -- besides get Heaven back.
- COMMENTS
DeLord12804over 2 years agoI still gave it all five, I sorta liked the way Zane handled Atilla the None.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThe tail end of this installment may have been a bit forced, but Zane and Christine will get Heaven back. (big plus). I am an older man, so the torrid sexual ravishment of an older, busty, large assed, and 'gorgeous' Dean of school did turn me on. So, I thank you, and will keep reading as long as you keep writing, deal?
FinalStandabout 5 years agoAuthorThe final scene was a bit forced, but I wanted to show how ruthless and vile the Chancellor could be and some of the psychology behind it. I knew she was going to be going back into the shadows for a bit and I wanted the readers to know she wasn't going away permanently.
I hope I have learned from the experience.
Thanks for the critique, JC, and take care,
James aka FinalStand
JC_The_Continuerabout 5 years agoI've always enjoyed your ability to suspend reality with your writing, but I think this chaper was just a bit beyond that.
It just... I dunno. Felt forced somehow?
I can't put a finger on it, but the whole 'play about resistance for the super repressed witch' just felt too much.
outside that, the war and the battle got my heart pounding and each punch I felt myself tense up with a 'GO ON LASS!'
jc
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThe balance of humor and story telling makes this entertaining. Sex with the Chancellor was ridiculous and doesn't contribute to either.
