All Comments on 'Christian College Sex Comedy Ch. 33'

I remember the fear of meeting parents one at a time. What a great idea to have this scenario...it's one of the reasons I love this series so much. So long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading and hanging 5's on each as they so richly deserve!

waiting for more.....

Thanks! Another great chapter

Okay it is Angels, just having the odd flashback to a story were an author wrote a line 'The angel of entry revealed Angles' So much fun I half expected Savannah to get Barbie Lynn treatment from Zane the Whole experience.

Lots of fun need it with Jas in Boston

DAMSEL APPROVED

Finally! Thought you had forgotten about your fans.

Hope I don't have to wait as long for the next chapter.

As always,

So much fun to read. Don't waste any time on the next installment.

This story is -the- best story I've read on this site, thus far. It's what keeps me coming back.

Love it!! Keep it up :D

thank frigging god your back to writting on this series ive been waitng months more more more

Glad you're back continuing this really cool story

Great chapter, keep up the amazing work.

Thanks for posting another chapter after so long. Keep up the great work!

Just found this series and pretty much have read straight through. It is that good. Love the humor mixed in. I was looking forward to seeing how Valerie's mom handled meeting Zane since she was looking forward to meeting him at homecoming, but I guess that is to come in a later chapter. Just gives me something to look forward to. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and i hope you continue.

Glad to see you back with more of the story. I was starting to have bad withdrawal symptoms.

For reasons of his own which he has not seen fit to communicate to me FinalStand has not responded to 2 polite emails from me asking why I have not heard from him in weeks.

I did look at the 1st part of this chapter, but he has no doubt made changes which in some cases needed editing. As for the 2nd half, I never saw any of it.

Therefore, since I saw over 2 dozen typos and other errors in my read through, I would like all the readers to know that it is not due to my work. That I have been fired and still have my name attached to the final product is hardly fair.

To FinalStand -- it would have been nice to get a polite email firing me. I guess your bi-polar is action up. Have a nice life and I will still read your work because it is interesting and creative.

He edited the first half of the story until the scene with Savannah and Zane in his room. He had me re-write that scene and due to events beyond his control I was unable to get in touch with him so I went to a friend who offered his services to edit the back half. I rushed that process and here we are.

As for the e-mails - I'm not sure what is going on. I think most of the people here know that I try to respond to all feedback within 24 hours and would take a special effort with my editors since I don't feel like releasing a story without one due to my earlier failures. I am using a new e-mail address...that's all I can think of.

Sorry for the confusion and Steve is a great editor (though a bit of a ball-buster to work with he's so precise :D )

Waiting for your next chapter 34. Please include more action,sorority girls,

Waiting for your next chapters? Please included more SEX scenes! more stories on other Females,like FELICITY,WILLA,POLICEWOMEN,HUDSON.TARA!!!!

More Please??? The Sooner the better!! Please write more stories on the Biker'sChicks,Cops,Church ladies,Sorority Girls,Lawyers,School Officals,Other Co- d's?

Tare whee knot injoining tis starrylyne? Uf dem Chrispiian Collage Tex Cummedy? Speltczech is homophone-phobic coded by progroomers who are functionally illiterate!

It is down-wrong hilarious when auto-replace functions place the wrong word in the correct context. Puns and malapropisms and even catachresis spice up the reading enjoyment for those of us who laugh at the pretentious nonsense plavered by the grimmer nasties.

I hope there is more coming soon.

Thank you for this story and looking forward to more chapters. Stumbled into this story and could not put it down for two days to read all the way through. I would also enjoy understanding how the chancellor still fits in and what the answer is to Cordelia and her manipulations are.

Chapter 34 has been submitted to my new editor.

The Chancellor Bass was retained in her spot at the behest of the most conservative members of the BOD. Scarlet was brought in by the more 'forward thinking' conservative members. Currently, Scarlet's faction is stronger so she dictates what school policy is thought technically Bass is her boss. As you might guess, this is not the last we will hear of the Chancellor. She's biding her time but don't expect to see her until the Spring Semester (Book 2).

Cordelia, and her plans and machinations, are a long running theme in the story. She is the smartest person on campus; perhaps the smartest person Zane will ever meet. It is too easy to see her as Zane's enemy though. She has her own plans, they include Zane as well as several other students but she isn't a villain. Cordelia has proven she will work with Zane when asked in reciprocation for Zane working with her.

Cordelia will work to protect the school and Zane. It is the best interest of her plans with the added bonus that it is the right thing to do.

Finally made it to the last published chapter and I can't wait to read more. I like the Gabrielle Black character and it seems this story could build into a major fighting team against that wages combat against threats from the past. Scarlet also needs some serious pounding sex.

Nice set of short takes. Having Zane interact with the families has a great way to expose his thinking.

My only complaint is that, with so many plates in the air, it takes a long time for any of them to get respun.

Thanks for putting out more of this amusing story

Their appears to be a time gap between this chapter & prior...a few weeks?! Gaps in an otherwise good continuous story, now broken up!? Oh and your main characters have one major fatal flaw!

I made plenty of mistakes in my earlier works which were pointed out to me and I attempted to correct in later efforts. Not clearly delineating time jumps is one. Even a gap of a few hours I now try to use [***] if I'm sticking within the same sub-chapter ~ which I mark with {a few foreshadowing words} within a given chapter.

Ugh ... I wrote this chapter just under three years ago ... I can still hear Rio grousing "Get off your ass, Bitch, and write the next damn chapter," because you know how patient she can be.

James aka FinalStand

I thought homecoming was a massive thing to the student body in the US?

It kinda… snuck up on me, I even double checked that there wasn't a missing chapter somewhere because of how sharp the transition was and that this hadn't been mentioned until..., well now.

Anyway, awesome chapter.

JC