All Comments on 'Christmas Business in New York'

by LaPatitMort

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well Done; Great Premise

5/5

ram

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This touched me...

Until you have been loved throughly by an older man you will never know. However, no other lovers compare after. It can be a double edged sword. Oh, how I miss my older man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!

A great telling of the story. I have always believed that a woman with a stretch mark, scar or extra bit of padding was a much more interesting lover because she is more real and has experienced life. The reality you added to Carla is very beautiful. Please tell more of these lovers' story in another chapter.

LancerInLALancerInLAover 9 years ago
Thank you

I did not see who had written this at first, but by the tone of the story, I knew who it was. Thank you.

Val

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