by CinfulWifes
Your story would have easily been a '100' if you had not discontinued it so fast. You need to show that at least one of these studs was fucking her, and even better, shooting his baby-makers into her baby factory without aid of any birth control, so you could have looked forward to changing another stud's baby's diapers in a few months.
Think what could have happened if the three young guys had time to completely seduce his wife. He could have watched her getting triple fucked. One in the pussy, with one in her ass, then having her mouth filled full of cock. when they all shot their cum into her, that's the time he interrupt them and accuses her of cheating on him. He would have her dead to rights with no way she could lie her way out of her wrong doing. Take a few pictures with his cell phone for proof and just think of the power he could have over her. Thanks for the good story....Rich
Great story! It left me wanting more and thinking about all the naughty things that could happen next to your wife. Mmmm the thought of her getting stripped and slowly fondled and then slowly fucked by a group of guys (me in there too!) is great. And how you ponder about it at the end is wonderful.
very good story. Christmas story.
BUT A LITTLE SHORT. BUT OTHER THAN THAT VERY EROTIC.
GOOD STORY LINE. I CAN SEE ANOTHER PART. WITH IT GETTING
EVEN HOTTER.
I enjoyed your story though it was a little short and proofing would help.
The feeling of it though was sexy and involving.I reacted to the intensity of the images. Would love to read more please. Maybe keep this plot and expand it ?
Great opportunity missed and I agree the story should be longer.
I think it was a very good story. Maybe there should be a continue story. Where at another party these same guys get another go at it, and this time get further. After words she still don't know you watched.....
Very realistic.. That adds to the heat and allure.. and well paced, well written.
wish you would write more.
LikesGood Writing
Great story.waiting on. #2.hope to advance to next step of her getting shared with others to the ultimate high for us & ™u!!!!
I often fantasize about my wife being used by a group of younger guys, and enjoying it, while I watch (unknown to her).
The last paragraph tells us that the husband has a rather strong voyeur side.
The suthor(s) created two characters with a lot of potential, but stopped writing. C'est la vie.
May your party continue and the lads take your wife all the way. I know I would have just watched if it was mine
Needs some dialogue. Descriptions are nice but adding dialogue would make this a better read.
Way too short of a story, IMO. Could've been a lot more action on the dance floor, for example. Could've been a good orgasm for the wife when she was being eaten too, IMO.
Such great promise for a story only to have it cut way too short, IMO.
I liked the story. No need for fucking, just a lot of play makes it real.
It's a great start. Some gaps. Where is the rest of the story?
Another author selling the stupidity of being a cuckold. Why would he want to share her and become a non-factor in her sex life or anything else. Just another one for the wimpy wankers
Excerpt from the story follows:
Why had I allowed it to go as far as it did? Why was I so turned on watching these men grope and man handle my wife? What would have happened if the guests had not come down the hall? How far would I have let it continue? How far would she have let in continue?
And how can I recreate this scene again?
(I asked myself the same questions several times in my life.)
Always talk things over with your wife.
What a loser? What if they really raped her and forcefully gangbanged her. Would like wimpy boy get even more excited. Next time they will since there were no consequences this time. What a loser and a cuck wannabe. Just start wearing panties and quit calling yourself a man. Just a moron
4+ (4.4 = 88%, ☆☆☆☆+)
Some men (I am one of them) have a strong voyeur side. A man like that gets in a hypnotic trance of sorts when he sees his wife groped, kissed, and even fucked, before his very eyes.
We must not be judgemental. To each his own.
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"Anonymous over 6 years ago
Loved it
I often fantasize about my wife being used by a group of younger guys, and enjoying it, while I watch (unknown to her)."
"Hours pasted, as did the drinks" ... "throws of pleasure"? It is "passed" and "throes". There are a lot of run-on sentences in addition to these incorrect words, so I would suggest that you get yourself an editor to improve your writing. The story also was too short IMHO, and for those reasons I could only give you a 3. The concept of the three guys dragging the wife into a bedroom was hot, but you ended it too soon.
This story is not perfect, but i really liked it because it is totally true to life. Actually something similar, but way less dramatic, happened to me while my wife and I were camping.
A large group of campers was sitting around the campfire. My wife was wearing her Daisy Dukes. I went to our tent to get some mosquito repellent.
On my way back i took a shortcut. I was still in the bushes when i saw my wife had company. A guy was sitting beside her and he was caressing her thighs. She totally let him do it. His hand would go from her knee, all the wayup her thigh to the rim of her cutoffs. I froze. I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts. He tried, but she wouldn't let him kiss her. He continued caressing her thigh. I saw all of that; i watched my wife and the man as though that had nothing to do with me. My mind was foggy.
She told him that he had to leave because her husband would join her "any moment now." Before he left he kissed her bare thighs very close to the crotch.
I never told my wife what I had seen her. With hindsight I think my brain relegated all relative memory to a back burner because I was not ready to "handle the truth" as yet.
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BarbieKen, almost 5 years ago
Fondling
I liked the story. No need for fucking, just a lot of play makes it real.
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Anonymous3 months ago
This story is not perfect, but i really liked it because it is totally true to life. Actually something similar, but way less dramatic, happened to me while my wife and I were camping.
A large group of campers was sitting around the campfire. My wife was wearing her Daisy Dukes. I went to our tent to get some mosquito repellent.
On my way back i took a shortcut. I was still in the bushes when i saw my wife had company. A guy was sitting beside her and he was caressing her thighs. She totally let him do it. His hand would go from her knee, all the wayup her thigh to the rim of her cutoffs. I froze. I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts. He tried, but she wouldn't let him kiss her. He continued caressing her thigh. I saw all of that; i watched my wife and the man as though that had nothing to do with me. My mind was foggy.
She told him that he had to leave because her husband would join her "any moment now." Before he left he kissed her bare thighs very close to the crotch.
I never told my wife what I had seen her. With hindsight I think my brain relegated all relative memory to a back burner because I was not ready to "handle the truth" as yet.
Dnd quote.
Lucky husband to have such a desirable wife who enjoys the attention. He should encourage her to go further as it is such a turn on
I loved this story; i really can relate to it.
What happens at parties had better stay at parties.
Wife was having her pussy eaten by a guy and she loved it!
The husband catches her red-handed.
He first must tell her that in his heart she is still his wife. (Partners must feel secure in the relationship at all times!)
In my mind the couple has a perfect opportunity to reinvigorate their sex life and tbheir love for each other.
The relationship need not be monogamous, it may as well be 'monogamish.'
Excerpt from the story.
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I looked over at my wife on the dance floor and she was dancing with three of the guys at the same time. Her wrap around sweater seemed to be much looser than before. The neck line was plunging and her breasts were bouncing and swaying. I looked at the boys and they looked like starved wolves admiring a kill.
They had her trapped in a triangle and kept closing the gap. Soon all had their hands on her in some manner. They were spinning her around the triangle and each was taking great liberties with where their hands were being placed on her...
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This story is very very erotic!
As to parties I can tell you that
shit happens but life goes on.
The WIFE from the story is a KEEPER.
I may be showing my age here but I didn't find this at all erotic, especially as the wife had been drinking a lot. I find the idea of men taking advantage of inebriated women repugnant.
Haha, great times! I've been fondled, fingered and fucked at office parties, most women probably have a story or two. I even when down on one of the women execs once in the host's bathroom, not my first pussy but she did cum. My first black guy fucked me on a work desk late on night, omg was that wild. Great memories if you can hang on to them.
Your wife was raped which is the most heinous thing you can do to a woman. You should have stopped them period, not trying to figure out how to recreate the scene.