by lady_dakaar
I dont know about the other person who left you that comment but I thought your writing was very well done. I know for a fact that a penis that is 10 inches long when hard can be as short as 3 inches when limp, so dont worry about it. (My hubby is that way lol). I thought it was a very well written story and would love to know if you plan on doing another story with these two characters. Keep up the good work!!
I love the way that you went from sensual to driving sexual need......... well done