All Comments on 'Christmas Shopping Ch. 03'

What else can I say? Ash and Lisa together was so sexy; Uncle Mike is a lucky guy. And I love how Ash is now teasing her dad; he's going to be so surprised with his christmas present.Great idea to leave him in the dark til then. Another triumph. Thanks!

Fantastic work, can't wait to read more!

I'm reading all your stuff right now and going thru commenting on each. they are hot and i love the way you tell them. Its not overly polished but I like that. Sometimes more raw feels more real. I also like that the sizes are realistic. Not every guy is ten inches and 6 inches thick and not every girl is 5'7 & ninety pounds with huge 38DD tits. The realistic women make this so enjoyable to read. Please keep it up

Tiki,

Its been two whole months since your last addition, Biker Chick. Please come back and do the ending for this one. Its such a great story but it needs an ending.

DOM74

Tina it is getting better all the time.

Ward

Great Story!

Someone said here that you are getting better all the time...so VERY true

This was a WOW chapter, a pure orgasmic delight

I can't wait to read the next part, make that live the next part I feel myself right there

Awesome

Jean