All Comments on 'Christmas Visit'

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moonintheDarkmoonintheDarkover 15 years ago
Amazing

Simply wonderful. Touching and very well written. Thank You for sharing. radiantmoon{TD1}

lizzi6692lizzi6692almost 14 years ago
Great

except for one thing, N/nobody A/actually T/talks L/like T/his. Anybody who does is either an arrogant prick or the slave of an arrogant prick, that took away from an otherwise amazing story.

It's actually kind of creepy how much your story resembled my boyfriend and I lol.

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