All Comments on 'Chronicles of Danny Ch. 01'

by bbettyblambabam

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story

great story, just edit your pronouns she is always referred to in plural.

bbettyblambabambbettyblambabamover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks and regarding pronouns

Thank you for reading! yes the use of plural pronouns is intentional as the preferred way genderqueer and other folk who do not identify as male or female is as them/they etc. I will keep this in consideration though from the readers' point of view when working on future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
crosses and mormons

Good story, but Mormons don't wear crosses

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