All Comments on 'Chuck's Fantasy Ch. 01'

I like the start of your story, and suspect based on your other writings you know how to finish it.

B O R I N G

Again, the same tired old thing. If you have writers block, don't just take an old story out and change the names, lad! Write something in a new genre! Try the Gay cycle or incest or something.

You started recycling plotlines now are down to recyling sentences! How many times have you used the old I love my husband and I know he loves me but we will get a divorce over this ploy? JPB, this is one of YOUR stories, laddie. Unless she gets a really bad case of crotch rot from screwing the burro in TJ the hubby will accept anything! We know that now. This "hook" doesn't work anymore.

You already set up the poor cum-lapping freak so why on earth would he be upset now?

To the folks who want to read this or his other submission: save yourselves some time and fustration. Get one of JPB's earlier works and where you see the hubby's name change it. Ex: Stan read Fred. Sarah read Edith. Saves you the time of waiting for the next post becasue this really is warmed over storylines!

No, you need to start doing something different.

Regards,

C

This drivel was already posted on another site, six chapters in all, with the sixth marked with a statement of the seventh being in your head. Asshole doesn't have the brains to finish its own stories.

JPB- we agree with the others, try doing a non-wimp male story to balance the scales. Chuck unfortunately is and remains the wimp husband as the whole story is written on the SOL site. Geez, author-do something different.

Bob's stories are some of the hottest on the site. I like the innocent-girl-turned-slut-after-being-taken-advantage-of.

Was too hard to write the other story flavors? You are write back to where you were months ago - pissing off all the semi-normal men and women with your freakie self cuckolding of yourself.

It still isn't arousing or erotic - still just plane sick bobie and you know it. Only the wierdos fantisising about their own wife fucking bigger cocks so they can helplessly watch beeg cocks as you seem to prefer in this weak male demeaning below human convention crap.

As Chagrind points out - just samo samo with name changes! Are you really getting lazy bobie or is it the addiction to male humiliation leaking out - again??? Maybe just seeking more attention eh little sick one.

Either way - Still a sad waste of talent!

Bob is a great writer.

It's just a story.

Get over yourselves people.

I never miss any of your stories and I can't understand all the negative comments. These are erotic stories and I believe this fantasy is a common fantasy with many men. Keep posting more of the same for those of us who enjoy reading about men who love to share their wives.

JPB is off on another good theme. Frankly this reads like part of a true to life scenario that I like many guys have thought about and maybe even indulged in.

Keep up the good work!

T

I think I have read a VERY similar story, and she messes up re what Chuck's fantasy is. Since she told us, at the beginning, that they were headed for divorce, sounds like they did not properly communicate before she took a step too far. We'll see. "Forgive me or let's get divorced." (I don't like the relatively low score for the last chapter. Did JPB's ending piss off too many readers?)

This writer must be a complete cuck with strong gay issues.

What stupid pathetic nonsense wimp tale.

1* for this crap.

just plain shit, you read one you read them all, this content is a waste of time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's a wife sharing or wife watching story. So what! It is their kink. Who are you guys to criticize their kink. I suppose you don't have any kinks. How boring. People should read these stories for what what they are; erotica. Good job so far. A 4 Star Rating.

Another JPB clunker. I'm in a Bob slump again.

Ludicrous plot. Just wondering who'd be so keen on putting his member somewhere others (plural!!) have freshly unloaded?

After 6 parts the story wasn’t finished. Guess JPB just lost interest.