All Comments on 'Cinder Whore Ch. 03'

I don't care it's brothers and a father this story does not belong on the incest site. Its most certainly belongs on the BDSM site. I could only give it a one and I'm ashamed it couldn't be less.

If you had spent ANY time on this site, you would have realized that Literotica puts all stories with any incest in them in the incest category. Incest, according to this site, trumps everything. Your comment is ignorant of the situation.

I love the cinderella story and this is just horrific. I don't even know what to say about it except this is the most cruel and horrible story ever.

Heres an idea .....Read the god dam description of the story first. That way you dont have to read something you wont like and we don't have to listen to you people bitch and moan about it.

Once again awesome chapter LaSalia....I gave you 10 stars as I voted twice!! Yay me

Thanks! I know, people are just haters! Why read the three pages if you don't like it? If a story doesn't interest me, for whatever reason, I leave and just don't vote. Different strokes for different folks! The exceptions being the really badly written ones, I'll give a two on those to warn away others and comment to the author that an editor is a must. Different situation there, though.

Great story, great writting skills, and grrat creatively! Hope theres more...

I loved this and just read all 3 chapters... Keep up the good work will be reading your other stories soon :)

I've been following your stories with great interest...you have an arresting style and a rich (if slightly dark ;) ) mind. I especially enjoy the Cinder Whore series. I hope you can continue this story at the fast pace it so richly deserves. Thanks for the great read :)

This story had everything ! It's amazing and written well . I love it and could read for days .