All Comments on 'Cindy Ch. 02'

A few spelling errors but still an exciting read.

Left wanting! Thinking a little bondage and spanking is in order!!

That was short and wanting! Perhaps a good spanking is in order with bondage?

More please.

Leaving the section unfinished destroyed the story to a certain extent. It does leave the reader in suspense about what happens but you did not complete the chapter and so took something away from the story. Otherwise this is great writing - I love it. 5 Stars!

Thats mean! Come on don't keep us waiting too long! Another good chapter!

The abrupt ending was cruel. I look forward to the next chapter.

Nooooo I wanted it to continue. That is a punishment sir. Update soon.

I just whined out loud... "Nooooo I want more! This is too short and driving me mad"

I will wait patiently in the corner