by vet42
Thanks for the comments on my story, Allison's Day. I appreciate your feedback.
I made Cindy's Dreams one of my favorites several weeks ago. It's an incredible story with great visuals. I felt like I was right in the middle of it. I like reading Cindy's thoughts and feelings as much as the physical descriptions. Great pacing, and you had the emotional experience of public nudity down pat. Nice work!
Neatly done! I like the combination of shyness and boldness, with building excitement. I also like the hints that this hot fox looks like a real woman, instead of meeting some absurd and impossible standard of perfection. I'll be looking for more!
I have to say that this is the first story in a long time that actually had me stroking myself halfway through...any chance of a continuation???