All Comments on 'Claiming an Ally Ch. 04'

Can't wait for the next chapter! Such a great story!

Titania, I have an intense love for you right now for finally releasing this. Your the. Best author on this entire site without a doubt, and I hope to see chapter 5 :)

Please don't let her get raped by bandits :(

Please.

Keep going. Can't wait for more.

I love where you're going with this, really well written, I just hope that he does some serious grovelling after that last scene.

Want more!! The beautiful end. Sat the whole night mesmerized by all 4 chapters! U r a true genius to be ably to bridle the feelings response in the characters so well that it come live in the reader. Please write the finish as well and today!! lol! I mean as soon as u can as I want to see them finally together as they should be.. Hurry pls:):)

I love it! I love how stong the princess is and it is great that she is an intelligent with some uber fighting skills and that although Edrich is ofcourse gorgeous he has made some serious mistakes!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you

Hugs and Kisses to you! I am loving the way the tale is evolving. Can you help a devoted reader out by adding a comment about what date you expect the next chapter to be available? I am constantly checking your profile for new submissions. Thanks for all the great work.

It was great to see that Edrich confront his own failings. I thought Em explained beautifully why she succumbed to his charms and her physiological response does nothing to diminish her bad assed noble character.

Loved the latest addition to the series. Hope Em can get back to her homeland safely. If I was the king, i'd be feeling like a fool at the moment, and rightfully so. I now hate Jenner with passion. Can't wait for the next chapter :-)

Wow, what a great chapter!

I do have a question though, shouldn't Ed as king have the sort of talent or skill to be aware of everything to a degree even if he's stressed? I mean, she slipped, almost saying "father" and he didn't catch it. Mmm, that was just something that made me wanna pinch Ed for not paying full attention to what Em has been saying. Other than that :D I LOVED IT (I actually kept checking in to see if it's up or not, pathetic I know.. I'm just enthralled with your story <3) Please don't take too long for the next update, or actually DO cause I do need to focus on studying. P.S. Leonard and his wife, oh and Robert, are such sweethearts. Oh! And the ASS, he actually TOOK her when he knew she wasn't wet for him! I mean how does that spell out "Hate circumstances but still sorta love/lust after you"?

Love the series so much! Next chapter please. I'm "begging" you :D

You know, just like the previous comment, everyday I keep checking whether there's an update. Pathetic, yes....

I would love to say the next chapter is finished...but it's not :( sorry. However, I am currently working on it...and depending on the strength of my muse today, I may finish it tonight or tomorrow and then submit...so hopefully by Saturday it should be posted and waiting for you (maybe sooner, but don't bet on it ;) )

Thanks for all your comments! I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Titania123

I love

The play you have with your words and how smooth the trasitions are between things. Also great character development. Keep it

Up.

Beautiful story, love the ache and angst!

Love it even more. I think you are wonderfully talented; can't wait to read more of your work. Thanks for share

Keep up the great work!

Really love this story and can't wait for the update! I really don't know how he could possibly gain her favor at this point considering his actions. Great writing, you really make the reader feel for the characters

Absolutely loving the story and completely hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please upload soon as I'm on pins and needles!

PLEASE!!!! I enjoy your work so far... Its very GOOD! Update earlier please... :D

Begging you as Emera begged Edrich. ;)

Good idea letting her escape before he learned the truth, or the story would be cut short there. One idea: use a thesaurus. It wasn't very often, but there were at least two instances where you used the same adjective/noun in two adjacent sentences. I find that it helps the flow if you repeat yourself as little as possible. Don't be embarrassed to use it! And you'll probably only notice when you read through the story after it's written, it's hard to catch in the heat of the moment. As for time/space appropriate word for the g-spot... there isn't one. What I usually do is actually describe the "swollen bean-shaped area of the anterior or front wall of the vagina" with a variation of those words. Any woman or man who is familiar with g-spot stimulation will know what his/her fingers are rubbing against in the top part of the woman only a few inches in. And if they don't, the description might help them find out!

Loved this story so far. Hope to read more soon!

loved it! Waiting not so patiently for the next chapter! =) really great writting

was hoping the 5th chapter would be out by now :(

I've submitted the 5th chapter almost two days ago...so it just depends on how quickly the editors review it before they release it. Sometimes it's a day, others three...sorry for the wait.

I really enjoy your storyline as well as your character development. It's a bit frustrating at times when I get impatient and want desperately to know WHEN they're going to realize they've been betrayed and WHEN she's going to get away. But I think you're a great writer. As for MDS complaints I find them to be silly.

Isn't that what all us women for looking for? What's wrong with a magical dick???

Lol.XD

Aw man I really cried on the last page. They need to be together. I wanted her to escape, but now I see that that was a horrible idea. I only hope that they will be brought together again.

i am continually impressed with the quality of your writing, as well as the story itself. look forward to reading more!

This was one of the most well written sex scenes I have ever read. Perfect non-consent. Loved it.

This story is incredible!

It made me cry. Thank you for writing such a compelling story.

I really like your writing..awesome..

Ach. I knew he should never have deflowered her. Now, rape. How will he ever re-earn her respect? For how long will he have to beg? And will begging be enough? I hope you can write your way out of this one.

FYI, Decimate does not mean devastate or destroy. It specifically means "removal of a tenth", from decem, the Latin word for ten. Killing 10% of the population of a village still leaves 90%; it doesn't wipe them out.

The Romans used it to punish large numbers of rebels or mutineers, selecting one out of every ten men for death. The remaining nine were then forced to beat their former comrade to death, thus a horribly cruel punishment.

Love it!