by wigwam25
It seems that if Claire didn't want to take any chances on her getting herself "a little bit pregnant" she would have insisted on "in the back, not the front" treatment/delight ... u might have indicated whether she was on the pill or not to enhance the story a bit!
The tale (or if you like "tail") uses the word "pussy" 26 times ... perhaps u could vary the term for a woman's quim
"Etymology 1[edit]
"Origin uncertain; perhaps an alteration of queme. The English Dialect Dictionary has a citation of "quim and cosh" from 1723 which it glosses as "intimate and familiar". Compare also quaint, cunt. Derivation from Welsh cwm (“hollow”) is sometimes suggested, but the OED notes that this is "unlikely on both semantic and phonological grounds"."
along with many other words for her lovely little front door receptacle ... likewise, if she's suggesting saddlebacking, there r plenty of terms for her back-door delights that might make the story more interesting
You need an editor or someone who is better then you at English. One example - her shear bras. Shear is how remove hair from sheep - Sheer is the word you want. There are several like this in this story but this one you repeat often. It detracts from the story and misspells are common also.
Despite a few errors this was a fun story to read. A hot fun little wife!
As for me, I enjoy being felt up by two of my coworkers...one is ten years older and the other is ten years younger.i let them set the limits, but they don't pass the information around the office. No photos or videos. Anything they see, they can touch. I have been on short trips with both of them and had to spend a night at a motel. They have each had sex with me. Thanks for reminding me.