All Comments on 'Claire Finds Her Orgasm Ch. 03'

. . . written this story in my first submission to Lit. There is a natural desire it seems to me that the parties in an affair want to discover what life would be like IF. IF is an incredible word, goes along with BUT - equivical. If Claire and Mark have a successful three months, can they all get back to where they were in a three or four part relationship even if they all collectively want to. Author has opened up a delightful can of worms; let's see how he baits the poll.

Claire could have put an end to it In fact she should What kind of man let's his wife go for three or four months? It just became totally unrealistic Listen Claire if you want Mark you can't have Seth Its the way of the world darling Can't have your cake and eat it to Easy solution cut Seth loose and move on with your life You made a plausible story stupid with this trial Who would wantnClaire back Seth? Hope not

This is how it is going to be, we won't tell any family, if there is a function I may have you go with me, until this is resolved.

what ? he sits on the scaffold and is not alout to tell about the verdict?

ever read anything dumber ? guess not. love and erotic is the missing part in this story = mission failed

This is NOT a swinging story this is NOT an "Open marriage" story this is just one hell of a fucked up idea. Who in their right mind would allow their wife to go off and fuck someone for 3 months just like that? no discussion, no talking about it just

"I'm fucking someone else that I love. I may or may not come back. Deal with it."

If this is the writers idea of an open or swinging marriage god help the poor smuck she is married to. I truly pity him. Seth should run now to his girlfriend and stay there let Mark take care of the bitch.

I see BNB has weighed in on this story. I'm not surprised he likes it...as he pointed out, he wrote on the same theme (under Novellas) and put a lot of talented effort into developing his characters. In this story, I have not been convinced of the depth of Seth's feelings about his wife, he seems to have been more motivated by getting back into Lauren's pants (and would still be there except that Lauren wanted more from Seth!). Without that depth, his tolerance for Claire's escalations is highly unlikely!

Hopefull Sethh grow some balls and dumps the cheating whore Clare, after all she is the one that wanted to sample other dicks, and if he is very lucky Mark will give her AIDS and knock her up at the same time. The the slut and her bastard lover cand die to gether

There is no ending to this series. How does it end? Are you going to finish this

story?

you get what you wish for ,it will bit you on the ass to bad for the husban..

Great story but would be interesting who really wins out, Seth or Mark?

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Like I commented before marriage over. Seth can now file devorse papers under abandonment.

Sorry I read all the chapter, no ending. What a waste of my time.

Sorry I hung around. After the first chapter, I didn't see how it could go wrong, but the second chapter left me wondering. Who really was writing this story? First. There's not enough room in a car for all the acrobatics described here. Second. Everybody knows that someone will eventually get curious and go check whats going on in the car. So why would anybody undress completely and spend all that time going down and expecting the other person to reciprocate? You don't spend hours in a car in a parking lot before the police are there to investigate. And then the third chapter. What happened? It seemed that the author ran out of ideas and ended it with no ending. I know it's a fantasy, but please make it believable.

Wow. What a trainwreck. Claire is an execrable bitch. Started to drift in second chapter. This was a waste of time.