All Comments on 'Claire's Christmas'

Big fan of your writing. More Goblin and Paladin!

one of the greatest characters ever + one of the greatest authors ever = one of the greatest stories ever.

one of the best ever. keep it up!

Thanks Georgieboy for the early present. I only partially opened it (first 2 pages) yet I know this will be the best present ever from Literotica. Thanks and do have a merry one!

A mind-blowing tale starring one of Literotica's greatest characters. A superb Christmas present! Thanks very, very much!

Cross Over situations are stupidly fun. Many thanks as usual George. Have a happy holiday season.

Best story ever.

Superb and glad Seth allowed you to use the best character on Literotica! Please write more about her,.. you are the tops George and thanks for this again

George, thanks for looking after her! A great story and just the kind of situation Claire would find herself in. Seth.

Great Story. I am a fan of both writers and glad to see the sharing of characters.

Finding the most amusing and awkward spots in which to take advantage of Claire is half the fun. And you did this very well. The other half that makes it so enjoyable is her total naivete. I think this story would make seth-perm proud. I love how these stories take gullible characters like Biker's Jenny, and Carrie from the old Playboy mags, and follow through with some nice raunchy sex. Well done!

Like all other reviewers, I really liked this story you penned, it was quite imaginative and well paced, except it seemed to take Santa some time to finally get around to screwing the lass, but that's just a personal observation. The 'but' in my critique has to do with Santa's outfit and the idea of all those kids sitting on his lap - I don't know. Just disgusted me to the point that I couldn't get it out of my head as I kept reading. Them smelling his breath, sitting on his stained pants, etc. If the outfit was just old and worn from age and not abuse, and if Santa drank the beer after work or during break-time. If my Mother had brought me there, I'd have felt I was looking at the boogie man, for sure and would have run like the dickens at such a sight. Again, otherwise, the nastiness and fun you had with Claire and her naivete was well done and a joy to read.

Great character, and thanks for letting us know about seth_perm, whose stories are almost as good! One suggestion: the (physically) disgusting male characters are a little off-putting, although obviously the humiliation is hot. Maybe there's a way to emphasize the power/humiliation issue in a more attractive way?

I agree with many of the comments - a delightfully raunchy tale; great characters, plot, dialog & action. But there were some misspellings, grammatical errors and at least one continuity error: "...As she bobbed her head faster on his cock he eagerly squeezed at her big breasts through her bra..." = at that point he had previously had her take her bra off. Also the ending was a little abrupt.

Regardless of the errors, I did enjoy it very much.

Great start of story with the descriptions, but Clair is just too gullible. With your good writing style I would have thought you could have come up with something better. Please try again.

F*%kin' great. You're skill is evident. you matched seth's style and got that character spot on. She's been my ~fav~ character and I was happy to stumble upon your story. I'd like to see you do more. How about Claire gets a temp. job with a traveling fair. They want her to do the water balloon dunk. She'll have to try on their outfits for the Carnie in charge, the outfit can slip off while she's being dunked, and one of the guys in the crowd can trap her in the out house, a line could form, and other carnie vendors can ask for her help with their rides and she'd be stupid enough to think she could help, like at the hall of mirrors... Just a few ideas. Good job.

This man should meet Calire!

http://www.heavy-r.com/video/101390/Trustworthy/

hey man that link did not work

It's been a while... I wish you'd borrow Claire once again!

Would love to see pt2 and more...

You and Seth_Perm are my favourite writers on here and Claire as well as Victoria Anderson are my favourite characters, great writing. I just love their naivity, please keep writing Claire and Victoria please.

Please write more Claire stories!!!

More Claire please!

do write one more

loved this... which there was more.

I would love to have Claire as a Christmas present.

I got so hard my wife sucked me off the her mom fucked me wondefull

My mom sucks me off many times I love it .

God Dayum! I love this story and all the other Claire's Career stories! SO HOT!