All Comments on 'Classy Carissa...Or Is She? Ch. 1'

by BadBombshellBabe

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Agent 86Agent 86over 18 years ago
And, it's only Part 1 !!!!!

Oh,BadBombshellBabe - it's too hot to read all by myself! I think I'll save the rest for "later!"

Nice job of introducing the characters; excellent job of developing the characters. It's moving very smoothly; no mechanical laboring or forcing of descriptions going on. First person usage works great in building involvement.

Good work, A86

DarkStevenDarkStevenabout 17 years ago
Very nice.

Good illustration of where D/s is - between a submissive's ears.

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