by BadBombshellBabe
Oh,BadBombshellBabe - it's too hot to read all by myself! I think I'll save the rest for "later!"
Nice job of introducing the characters; excellent job of developing the characters. It's moving very smoothly; no mechanical laboring or forcing of descriptions going on. First person usage works great in building involvement.
Good work, A86
Good illustration of where D/s is - between a submissive's ears.