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TigerLilyyabout 13 years agoThe only thing I noticed was some trouble with possessive nouns. Other than that, Awesome story! :)
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThe writing felt somewhat rigid when it came to dialogue, and some spelling and grammatical errors were spread out here and there, but other than that it was pretty good!
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