All Comments on 'Closing Night'

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don87654don87654about 19 years ago
Very, Very, Very, Very good!

Needs continued, with a lot more times, even after closing night.

DexicreonDexicreonabout 19 years ago
Nice story, but

...you need to do some serious editing. The story is still good, part of every male teachers' fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Ooooo.....

Very good first story. Liked it.

Let's have some more.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Almost perfect

Could have been a little more drawn out but had a perfecting ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
EDIT please

Too short and was the school really INfamous? I believe you should have used famous instead. Build up your characters. You have a decent story line...do something with it.

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