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All Comments on 'Club Noctum Aeternum: 1st Occurrence'

by demon_child

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Promising

Yes, I rated it as a good read....as long as you continue the story. It's not finished like this...

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 15 years ago
It's not bad but it did seem to

go rather quickly. Slow down, add details and maybe more tension...

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