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All Comments on 'Club Noctum Aeternum: 1st Occurrence'

by demon_child

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DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 15 years ago
It's not bad but it did seem to

go rather quickly. Slow down, add details and maybe more tension...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Promising

Yes, I rated it as a good read....as long as you continue the story. It's not finished like this...

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