by rogue01
It's excellently written, save for three examples of VRS, or proofreading, falling over.
Arm around her Waste / Waist ( twice)
The Music's Baseline / Bassline
her two Aureloes / Aureolae
What might be suitable for lesser people is not suitable for all.
Kilroy (Australia)
This is not a story. It is a scene from a story.
Keep trying Rogue01.
From america I am
AMerryMan