All Comments on 'Co-Ed Coercion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
miss used terms

The author needs to learn and use the proper form of some words. For female students only its "coed" and for a mixed group of both male/female students the word is "co-ed" interchanged leads to confusion.

lustwriterlustwriterover 13 years agoAuthor
my apologies

Yeah, sorry about that. I honestly thought they both meant the same thing and using either coed or co-ed was the preference of the writer. I'll be more careful with that in part 2. I hope you enjoyed the story despite that oversight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Well done, don't sweat the small stuff!

The thing I judge stories on is if they are believable or not, and THIS story was completely believable and PROBABLY happened somewhere. Any guy could be seduced like this, and if girls like this want you enough, they can get you and blackmail you afterwards! As for writing mistakes, they aren't even noticed by most ppl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
AWESOME!!!!

I totally loved it!!!

Too bad it was fiction, I would've loved it even more if it was real. Truly outstanding writting!!!!

I really enjoyed myself!!!

By far my favorite!!!

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