All Comments on 'Coaching the Pastor'

5 Stars

I would have given you 10 stars but there no place to click on. Great read!

This is very good writing in a very little exposed catagory. You have built up both enthrallment & suspense very nicely. Though I'm not a triathlete , I do try to stay in shape in my post fifty years old stage of life & admired how you melded the athleticism with carnality . Bravo !

I am so glad that you intend to continue the story! I can't wait!

I found this story because Just_the_tip made it one of his favorites. It reminds me of the first time I read one of EnCarta's stories, or en-extase. The pacing, the seduction, the fact it was a pastor, the reluctance, the power of the female character --- all of it was superb. An absolutely incredible first story. Thank you so much for contributing. I look forward to your next one.

Looking forward to next chapter

when will it continue?

WOW!

5 stars. I am beginning to feel 'harder it is stronger I am' my ED responds positively