All Comments on 'Cocky Clientele Ch. 01'

Ignore the previous comment, obviously left by some self righteous idiot, who has never posted anything other than a letter in a post box. The story is too short, and could possibly have been told in one piece. But you have left it hanging. I look forward to the next chapter. Dont let one bad feedback put you off.

who will shoot the previous commenter where he or she is missing his or her balls!

I was just getting warmed up and you stopped writing. I really enjoyed what you've written so far, but I think you could have included more in this part. I'll be looking out for your next submission. Keep writing x