All Comments on 'Coercion'

great start for a new writer..can only get better with more stories

i hope he knocks up his wife and mistress.

This was a great, sexy story, I hope you would write some more.

Hope to hear from you,

Gentle George

Should have been more anal

I want to eat my wifes pussy as her man fucks her, just the way shellie eats marys. I evev want the man to alternate between my wifes pussy and my mouth and like shellie I will pull his cock from her and suck down his cum when he shoots off

Pretty nice and awesome!

Some of the Rudi's dialougue when he and Shelly were caught in the act was pretty awkward, though. Perhaps, too calm. Like when he explains to Shelly that it's too late to do anything since they were already caught.

Great, you need to write the next chapter, please consider including Shelly's husband in a four way fuck so there are no losers.

I am surprised a woman wrote this. Men usually think they command the domination to make a woman submit to licking another woman while that woman is climaxing with the man inside her. Now I wonder if the author was Mary or Shelley. I vote Mary because she took charge of the slut and her husband’s tryst.