by professorjames
I want to read more about Don and Kelly. Don't end their story just because they got Randall.
The series was fine, except for all of the heavy handed insistence by the characters, (which seems to be common for your stories,) that any kind of BDSM play that isn't what they're into is bordering on the sociopathic and psychotic.
The timbre of the story was completely ruined for me. I like your writing style, and your imagination, but just couldn't go with you on it. It was just... too normative.
Justice in action, I love it. On top of that it’s so refreshing to see a healthy D/s relationship that isn’t over the top. BDSM is as varied as there are people who enjoy it with enjoyment being the key to it all. Very well done, thanks.