All Comments on 'Coercion Ch. 03'

by professorjames

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent Story

This was a great series of stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More

I want to read more about Don and Kelly. Don't end their story just because they got Randall.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A little didactic for erotica

The series was fine, except for all of the heavy handed insistence by the characters, (which seems to be common for your stories,) that any kind of BDSM play that isn't what they're into is bordering on the sociopathic and psychotic.

The timbre of the story was completely ruined for me. I like your writing style, and your imagination, but just couldn't go with you on it. It was just... too normative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Perfect

Justice in action, I love it. On top of that it’s so refreshing to see a healthy D/s relationship that isn’t over the top. BDSM is as varied as there are people who enjoy it with enjoyment being the key to it all. Very well done, thanks.

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