All Comments on 'Coffee Shop Surprise'

by peaches07

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cartepostalecartepostaleabout 11 years ago
Fantastic!

What a great story. I'd love to see if there will be another chapter.

caraquenocaraquenoabout 11 years ago

Great story, I agree with the last comment...what does she do next?

ENF42LoverENF42Loverabout 11 years ago

Very nice, please continue, my only suggestion...don't rush to sex, maybe have her masturbating in public...in a more embarassing situation.

a_libertinea_libertineabout 11 years ago
Love it

Love, love, love it. Great story idea and excellent execution of it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very nice!

A great idea-very well executed! I really enjoyed it. Please submit again, but, maybe next time- take it a little slower,let it build a bit more. All in all- very very nice!!

William smythWilliam smythabout 11 years ago
Good story line and excellent writing.

Stands alone as a very good story.

A sequel is not a good idea.

It would just detract from the appeal of the original 5 star effort.

But further stories featuring the adventures of this interesting female protagonist would be most welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
unf

This was goosebumps good just as it was. Didn't need more, before or after. If you choose to give us other scenes,well okie dokie. The not knowing was certainly the crux of this, so now what to do...what to do.

peaches07peaches07about 11 years agoAuthor
thanks!

I'm so flattered that you guys liked it. :) There may be more adventures for Alina on the horizon....

Markie2003Markie2003about 11 years ago
What a wonderful idea

What a wonderful idea, think I will buy a bullet vibrator and place an ad in craigslist looking for a customer, this should be fun!!!! Thank you, very hot story

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
loved this

Not only coffee gives you a buzz, but she got an extra shot of buzz. Very arousing, nicely detailed keep it up. Your very good

maddictmaddictalmost 9 years ago
Good girls don't, but ohh seven does.

Is this why starbucks is so popular ? The pervert in me loves girls who push there panties to the side in a hasty manor. Would you really do something like this, Thanks for sharing.

If you remember a show Cheers, Clif had a remote shock device to help with his behaviour, however someone found the remote and push it mercilessly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Black panties

Any chance you could place those sexy Black panties back into the bag and leave them in the bathroom? I would like to hold them, taste and smell them rub my throbbing cock on them then cum all over them. I promise to give them back when finished.

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