All Comments on 'Collateral'

by hickmouse

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What a stupid prick he was

NEVER share pictures. It always turns out badly. This is simply a tale of stupidity. Not a single good part to it. UGH!

mitthrawnuruodomitthrawnuruodoabout 9 years ago
@Anonymous

Hey anon. That's the whole point of it being a fantasy story.

Sharing pics in real life isn't smart, but in a story, it's fine. Do you think all these stories really happen?

Anyway, good story hickmouse, thanks for sharing it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why though?

The story is great, don’t get me wrong. But why did the girl suggest the idea of taking these collateral photos that aren’t supposed to be shown to ANYONE, just for her to break her own rule and show them to someone as soon as the fancy strikes her? Sounds like a pretty toxic and untrustworthy person if you ask me. She should have asked for permission before showing another person and breaking the pact they had made. Yuck.

1Martiniman1Martiniman3 months ago

Fun story…shame he didn’t get to keep the kinky girl.

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